I loved the development of Jared's character, from start to finish. Him going from quiet and closed off from the world to a more happy, friendly person was great. You described the transformation perfectly. I also loved the ending...it was sort of bittersweet, but still a "happy ending," and I really liked that.
Overall, great job! I'm so glad I decided to read this!
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Date: 2010-04-27 02:01 pm (UTC)I loved the development of Jared's character, from start to finish. Him going from quiet and closed off from the world to a more happy, friendly person was great. You described the transformation perfectly. I also loved the ending...it was sort of bittersweet, but still a "happy ending," and I really liked that.
Overall, great job! I'm so glad I decided to read this!